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发表于 2015-4-2 09:49 PM | 显示全部楼层


本帖最后由 oldwolf 于 2015-4-2 09:59 PM 编辑

I was deeply moved while translating this poem...and I feel awkward in translating the true sprint of it...but I tried my best.


Everyday you stare at me
being squeezed at  the dead corner,
failing  to get out of it;
but you don't break in it either.
you think you got my secret,
while in fact you don't know me, but
I don't blame you on it


Everyone has a wound,
deep or shallow,
just because of being separated by network,
meaning they don't exist?
I gave a few drops of my fresh blood, but
you just don't know me.

Everybody can love,
with power ,soul and heart.
I splashed my affection as well as sorrow,but
you still don't know me.

Everyone has tears,
I drank  ice cold water,
and they brewed into hot tears,
showing my sad grievance,but
you don't know me either.

Everybody likes to admit love
howsoever nervous and worried,
but with courage and true heart.
I left out my most enchanting words here,but
you don' t know me ever

I cannot see that you love me,
maybe the moment I am not here,you love me the most?
I cannot see your loneliness either,
maybe the moment I am not here you feel lonely the most?

maybe you hide your sorrow?
or you need me comfort you on your sadness?
who never walk on muddy roads in the storm?
who never experiences sunshine and dark clouds?

A few years already, we have walked all the way together,
Had you known me,
how wonderful it would have been?

Should we continue the journey,
if you know me
how wonderful it would be.

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Beautiful translation!  发表于 2015-4-2 11:17 PM

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发表于 2015-4-2 10:47 PM | 显示全部楼层
好诗好诗,今天才看到,给你一万个赞。

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美女才女,还你十万个赞!  发表于 2015-4-3 03:04 PM

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发表于 2015-4-3 08:14 AM | 显示全部楼层
肥大,是不是当年同桌的她给你的暗示?
狂赞老狼的中译英。

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 楼主| 发表于 2015-4-3 03:49 PM | 显示全部楼层
oldwolf 发表于 2015-4-2 09:49 PM
I was deeply moved while translating this poem...and I feel awkward in translating the true sprint o ...

wow !!


俄当你的big  fan !!!

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